A plot? Hmmm... Needs work so tell me what you think!?

hmmmmm... this is like Superman/batman/twilight. i dont think you've even ever read any of the comics, and i think you've read twilight books and you have just seen the superhero movies, also i dont think youre going to be able to pull of describing the action scences. dont use stephinie mayer cause her grammer skills are crap and its too much for a story line i mean high school, city, aa pack??, girls, parties hidden identiy i just dont think your a good enough writer start w/ something less complex and read some comics to even understand the terminology